Excerpt + Giveaway with Author Barry S. Richman!!!

Hi friends! Happy Friday! I’m very excited to welcome back author Barry S. Richman to Austenesque Reviews today! 🙌🏼

Just two days ago Barry celebrated the release of his seventh Pride and Prejudice inspired novel! 🥳

A Debt Inherited is a Pride and Prejudice variation that sounds like it is full of danger, drama, and Mr. Darcy being a hero! 🎩

Barry is here to share an enticing excerpt from A Debt Inherited and an exciting giveaway opportunity! 🙌🏼

We hope you enjoy! 🤗

 

~ Book Description ~

Hertfordshire, July 1812
Elizabeth Bennet has been kidnapped.
Fitzwilliam Darcy has one day left to find her.
He must save a woman he has never met.

Her captors demand £10,000 and give her father three days to pay. Two days are already gone. Mr Bennet possesses neither the money nor the influence to secure her return. His only hope lies in a letter written thirty years before—and in the nephew of the man who wrote it.

Fitzwilliam Darcy arrives at Longbourn expecting to settle an old debt of honour. Instead, he is drawn into a bargain with George Wickham and a second man whose grievance reaches far beyond money.

To save Elizabeth, Darcy must place himself in the hands of men who have every reason to despise him. Elizabeth, imprisoned and unable to see the stranger negotiating for her life, must decide whether his promises can be trusted.

As a buried scandal binds the Bennets, Darcys, and Fitzwilliams together, the ransom becomes something far more dangerous than an exchange of money.

Some debts pass through generations.

Men of honour do not leave them unpaid.

~ Excerpt from A Debt Inherited  ~

At The Stile

Oakham Mount, July 1812

Kerr waited below the crown of Oakham Mount, where the path narrowed between hedge and ditch. He had dressed for the hedge: brown coat, dark waistcoat, buckskin breeches dulled with earth at the knee, and boots rubbed free of shine. A strip of old leather bound each leg close below the knee, lest cloth catch upon thorn or bramble. He kept still beneath the ash boughs and watched the rise. From there he could see the stile, the bend in the lane, and the strip of open ground where a lady must slow before the ascent.

The morning had settled dry and close, the July heat already lifting the smell of grass, dust, and crushed leaf from the path. He did not move when a blackbird broke from the hedge, nor when a cart rattled faintly along the lower road. Movement drew the eye; stillness let the eye pass over him. The place would serve. Not at the crown, where wind and sky made witnesses of everything, but here, where hedge, ditch, and bough turned a man into another piece of the country. A lady must look to her feet at the stile. One step checked, one hand lifted, and the hedge would take her.

A breeze rattled the leaves above him. A thread of lavender and something else—sharp, perhaps lemon—hung in the air for a moment.

Then came voices. His mouth tightened.

She had not come alone. Yesterday, she had.

The first voice came quick and low, amusement tucked within it. He had heard it the day before. The other answered higher, more measured, answered as though every word had first been weighed.

Two heads rose beyond the hedge, one bonneted and one bare. The latter held her own bonnet by its ribbons as they approached the stile: fawn muslin beside serviceable brown, one lady proper for a morning call, the other dressed for distance.

The bare-headed lady turned towards the rise.

“Charlotte, must you truly leave tomorrow?”

Miss Charlotte Lucas. He recognised the name.

“I must, if I am to reach Hunsford before Mr Collins has rearranged every shelf in my absence.”

“With Jane in London, my younger sisters at Brighton, and Papa’s cane forbidding all ambitious exercise, you are the last person within walking distance who speaks sense.”

“Then Meryton is in graver condition than I had supposed.”

“I shall miss you.”

“And I you.”

Kerr watched them cross the stile and continue up the rise, their voices receding until the hedge kept only fragments. They reached the crest and passed beyond his sight.

He remained beneath the ash boughs until the last trace of lavender had gone from the air.

Miss Elizabeth Bennet would be alone tomorrow.

Poor Elizabeth…she doesn’t know what danger awaits her on the morrow! 🙈

And it sounds like the Bennets are in different situations than we normally see them – younger sisters in Brighton? Mr. Bennet using a cane? I wonder where these alterations will lead us…. 🤔

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GIVEAWAY TIME!!!

Barry is generously giving away 1 paperback book of A Debt Inherited in conjunction with his visit to this blog!!  Woot woot! 

 

To enter this giveaway, please leave a comment, question, or some love for Barry!

  • This giveaway is open worldwide  (international readers will receive a gift card in lieu of a paperback). Thank you, Barry!
  • This giveaway ends September 30th!

 

52 comments

  1. This sounds SO exciting and action packed! I hope there’s a bunch of Darcy & Elizabeth on-page time too. I really look forward to reading this. Congratulations on the new release and thanks for the giveaway opportunity

    1. Thank you, Kaidi. There is certainly plenty of action, and Darcy and Elizabeth both have important parts to play in the story. I hope the journey keeps you turning the pages. Thank you as well for the congratulations and for entering the giveaway.

  2. Wow! What an excerpt. Sounds amazing and dramatic! Hints of pressure and anxiety – nail biting.
    Congrats on another release. I’d love to read it.

  3. Sounds like a wonderful book! No need to enter me in the giveaway, but I wanted to say congrats to the author on what sounds to be another fascinating premise!

    1. Christina, that means a great deal coming from you. Seasons of Waiting remains one of the finest Pride and Prejudice variations I have read, so your kind words carry particular weight. Thank you for taking the time to stop by and offer them.

  4. I like the way a kidnapping story reveals so much about the kidnappers and the people who get taken. You learn a lot about the characters very quickly. I’m looking forward to reading your story and would love to win a book.

    1. Thank you, Myrna. That was one of the things that interested me about the kidnapping premise as well. It forces people to reveal themselves very quickly. I hope you enjoy the story, and good luck in the giveaway.

    1. Those are exactly the questions I hoped the excerpt would raise. The answers reach well beyond Elizabeth’s kidnapping, and I would rather not spoil the discoveries. I hope you enjoy finding out.

    1. Amanda, thank you. Knowing you have enjoyed my earlier books makes that especially gratifying. I hope A Debt Inherited earns its place among them.

  5. It’s got me hooked already ! Please consider using Audible – there is nothing so pleasurable as listening to a good Austenesque – having said that I will be happy to read it !!

    1. Thank you, Sarah. I am very pleased the excerpt hooked you. An audiobook is something I would certainly like to explore, although there are no firm plans at present. In the meantime, I hope the printed story proves just as pleasurable.

  6. This sounds quite angsty which I would struggle to cope with at the moment but I’m adding it to my list as it does sound like a great story. I’m wondering why Elizabeth was kidnapped? Why is Darcy attempting to rescue her? Did Wickham know Darcy would be involved? Who’s the other man? Ooooh! Problems, problems!

    1. Thank you, Glynis. You have identified several of the questions at the heart of the story, and I would rather let the book answer them than spoil the surprises here. I hope the angst proves worthwhile when the time is right for you to read it.

    1. Thank you, Lois. Elizabeth does indeed have a difficult road ahead of her, and I am glad the excerpt left you wondering where it leads.

    1. Thank you, Kathryn. I’m delighted the summary caught your attention, and I hope the story proves worth the wait on your wish list. Best of luck in the giveaway.

    1. Thank you. I had great fun developing the premise and then discovering just how much trouble it could cause for everyone involved.

    1. Thank you, Olga. I’m very pleased it intrigued you enough to make the wish list. I hope you enjoy it when you have the chance to read it.

  7. Thank you to Mr. Richman, for sharing his talent and his generosity for the give-away. I love that his stories are always rooted in reality, as opposed to contrivance. And also that his characters have such clear personalities and voices.

    1. Thank you, Adelle. That means a great deal to me. I try very hard to make the situations believable and to give each character a voice of his or her own. I truly appreciate your kind words.

  8. Please enter me in the giveaway. I enjoy JAFF stories that have kidnapping plots, and the description of this one sounds intriguing! Thank you, Meredith – I discovered your site a few weeks ago and am steadily going through your reviews to help me choose which books to read. I admit that I have not yead read anything by Barry S. Richman but I have seen several recommendations for his work. Cheers, Carla

      1. Thank you, Carla. I’m glad the premise caught your attention, and I hope this proves a good introduction to my work. My bio will give you insight into my writing style. Best of luck in the giveaway.

    1. Thank you. I wanted to try something a little different with Darcy and Elizabeth this time. I hope you enjoy where it takes them.

  9. I would also like to thank Meredith for once again hosting me and giving me the opportunity to connect directly with readers. The support and kindness so many of you have shown me over the years have meant more than I can properly say, and I remain very grateful for it. I also hope some of you will join me again in early 2027, when I plan to release The Quince Men, a darker Georgian-era story with a very different tone from my previous books.

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