Excerpt + Giveaway with Author Victoria Kincaid!!!

Happy Wednesday, readers! I am excited to welcome back Victoria Kincaid to Austenesque Reviews today. As you may have seen already, Victoria recently released a new audiobook of When Mary Met the Colonela Pride and Prejudice sequel we greatly enjoyed💕 I know many readers are a fan of listening to stories via audiobook, so it is exciting that this lovely title is now available! 🎧  Victoria is here to share an excerpt from When Mary Met the Colonel, we hope you enjoy!

Hello Meredith and thank you for welcoming me back to your blog! Today I am celebrating the release of the audiobook of When Mary Met the Colonel, narrated by the wonderful Stevie Zimmerman! When Mary Met the Colonel holds a special place in my heart. It was my first novella and my first book to focus on a story beyond Darcy and Elizabeth. The warm reception the book received from readers encouraged me to write a few other secondary character books.

The excerpt below is from an early scene when Mary Bennet encounters Colonel Fitzwilliam in the Longbourn garden. I hope you enjoy it!

“You are quite pretty, perhaps not in the same way as your sisters.” Mary’s lips parted slightly, and she appeared, if anything, even more bewildered. Had no one ever said as much to her? “And if by ‘lively’ you mean that your sisters chase men wearing red coats, then I am quite pleased you are comparatively sedate.” This elicited a giggle from the young lady. “Your presence is quite restful, and so far your conversation is vastly more interesting.”

She blinked rapidly at him as if not understanding his words. Surely someone else had thought to tell her how pretty she was? Then a deep blush spread itself over her face and the part of her neck revealed by her gown’s neckline, much higher than today’s styles. Why did a simple compliment provoke such a reaction?

“Thank you. It is very kind of you to say.” Her voice was almost a whisper. Mary fixed her gaze on a number of blossoms in her lap.

“I did not say it to be kind. It is what I observe.”

Blushing an even darker red, she glanced about the clearing as if hoping to be rescued from this conversation. She was not only unaccustomed to compliments but also exceedingly shy, Fitz decided. She resembled Georgiana a bit, although Miss Bennet must be at least two or three years older.

Apparently deciding that no help would be forthcoming, she returned her gaze to the hands tangled in her lap. She cleared her throat. “Mr. Darcy said you are recently returned from the peninsula.”

Fitz blinked, a bit surprised at the abrupt shift in topic. Did she wish to direct the conversation away from the personal? “Yes.”

“I have been following the war in the papers,” she murmured. Fitz raised his eyebrows. A woman had never broached this topic with him. “Do you believe those accounts to be accurate on the whole?”

Fitz leaned toward her slightly. “Are you certain you wish to speak about this? Many women find the topic to be…distressing.”

A crease formed between her eyebrows. “Sir, the events of this war will affect our country for generations to come. It will influence the futures of my nieces and nephews. Faced with such weighty matters, I do not understand why anyone believes I should care about the latest designs in lace!”

Abruptly, she bit her lip and blushed. “I apologize for that outburst. I have had a trying day. I am overwrought.” She stood quickly, straightening her skirts. “I will trouble you no—”

Without forethought, Fitz seized her hand in his. “Please do not leave just when you are proving to be an interesting conversational partner.” He remained seated, hoping it would encourage her to stay.

“I think I must.” She stared at the ground.

“Miss Bennet, if you will allow me to be frank, the majority of my visit has been occupied by your younger sister and her friend admiring the fine handiwork of the buttons on my uniform.” Her shoulders shook; had he provoked laughter? “Intelligent conversation about the happenings in the world would be quite welcome.”

Slowly, Mary’s head lifted. Her eyes traveled down her arm, paused on her hand—which he had not released—and then rose to meet his eyes. Whatever she saw there caused her body to soften slightly. Fitz took the opportunity to tug on her hand, encouraging her to sit once more.

It was wildly inappropriate to be holding her hand, although they both wore gloves. If anyone should happen upon them, their proximity could lead to all sorts of difficulties, including an accusation of compromising her reputation. Yet he could not bring himself to leave; he was too intrigued to allow the conversation to end.

She allowed him to pull her down on the bench beside him, and he instantly released her hand. “I pray you, ask your questions.” Mary regarded him warily, a wild animal that might be easily startled. “What did you wish to ask me?” he asked gently.

“Did you fight at Salamanca?” He nodded. Her eyes lit with interest. “The papers all claimed Wellington’s strategy was brilliant, but they never described the details. What did he do?”

Fitz was momentarily in the uncharacteristic position of being at a loss for words. This was her most pressing question? He expected a query about the Spanish people or Wellington’s character. Instead, she asked about…battle strategy?

Oh, I just love this exchange! I love that Colonel Fitzwilliam finds Mary an “interesting conversational partner!” That must me so much to her as often her conversation is not wanted. Thank you for sharing, Victoria!

Click HERE to listen to an audio sample of When Mary Met the Colonel narrated by Stevie Zimmerman.

~ Book Description ~

Without the beauty and wit of the older Bennet sisters or the liveliness of the younger, Mary is the Bennet sister most often overlooked. She has resigned herself to a life of loneliness, alleviated only by music and the occasional book of military history. Colonel Fitzwilliam finds himself envying his friends who are marrying wonderful women while he only attracts empty-headed flirts.

He longs for a caring, well-informed woman who will see the man beneath the uniform. During the wedding breakfast for Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet, a chance meeting in Longbourn’s garden kindles an attraction between Mary and the Colonel.

However, the Colonel cannot marry for love since he must wed an heiress. He returns to war, although Mary finds she cannot easily forget him. Is happily ever after possible after Mary meets the Colonel?

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GIVEAWAY TIME!!!

Today, Victoria brings with her ONE audiobook copy of When Mary Met the Colonel for me to give away to ONE lucky winner!

 To enter this giveaway, leave a comment, a question, or some love for Victoria!!

  • This giveaway is open worldwide.  Thank you, Victoria!
  • This giveaway ends August 19th!

32 comments

  1. Lovely excerpt! I love the pairing of Mary and Colonel Fitzwilliam. He could certainly bring her out of her shell. Thanks for the chance to win the audiobook!

  2. Intriguing excerpt on this well written book by one of my favorite authors. I would enjoy hearing the audio version. Thank you for the opportunity to win this story as told by Stevie Zimmerman.

  3. I have purchased the book and thoroughly enjoyed it. An audiobook copy would be the perfect companion. Thank you for the opportunity to win a copy.

  4. I’m new to audiobooks, and a lover of Austen and Austen continuations by her fans. What a wonderful tribute to a great writer! Mary and the Colonel as a couple, is one thing I never imagined before! Sounds inc0interestimg. Look forward to enjoying it.

  5. A Victoria Kincaid novel and Stevie Zimmerman, you can’t go wrong with that! I’d love a copy of the audio book.

    I know you like stories about supporting characters in Austen’s novels, Meredith. So do I. My question for Victoria is; what her favorite minor roll character/s is/are? And why? I love it when Mary gets an HEA. And I love the Mary & Colonel Fitzwilliams pairing. Best of luck everybody.

    1. Hi Michelle, Thank you for your lovely words! As for your question, it’s hard to answer. Usually I love whatever female minor character I’m writing at the time. As for male minor characters, it’s definitely Col. Fitzwilliam!

  6. Ooh, I love the idea of Mary and Colonel Fitzwilliam! I look forward to reading this book — and thanks for the opportunity to win a copy!

  7. Oh goodness, this is most fascinating how this will be set up! Colonel Fitzwilliam, who has to marry a fortune, meets a lady who doesn’t have the fortune required of him…yet, I can see him taking this kind of interest. There is something academic about the Colonel, especially when he and Lizzy in canon P&P discuss literature. I cannot wait to read this book one of these days!

  8. Wow, Mary talking and it is not about sermons…I like this Mary.

    I guess it is also surprising that she is talking to the Colonel (almost a stranger though now they are related in laws)

    Thank you for the execrept and the chance to win.

  9. Sounds like an interesting couple. I’d enjoy this. I enjoy audiobooks while coloring or playing games on my tablet.

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