Excerpt + Giveaway with Author Maggie Mooha!!!

Hi readers! I’m so delighted to welcome author Maggie Mooha to Austenesque Reviews for the very first time. Some of you may recognize her name and already be familiar with her previously published works – Elizabeth in the New World and The Darcys of New Orleans. Both sound like excellent choices for Janeites who enjoy travel or exploring new settings. 🗺

And as you may have already seen, Maggie just recently released a Pride and Prejudice retelling – Mr. Darcy and the Suffragette – that explores a new and exciting time period with our beloved Darcy and Elizabeth – the early 1900s. Maggie is here to share an excerpt from Mr. Darcy and the Suffragette that is sure to whet your appetite! We hope you enjoy! 🤗

~ Excerpt from Mr. Darcy and the Suffragette ~

Darcy was grateful for the regatta, for Charles Bingley’s sake if for nothing else. Despite the round of country house parties, gallery openings, and garden parties, a distinct pall had fallen over his friend. Most couldn’t see it. His sister seemed almost oblivious to it, encouraging him to attach himself to one female after another, but Charles wasn’t having it. Oh, he was pleasant enough in company, but Darcy could see that he was unhappy. He knew that Charles was enamoured of Jane, but in the few times Darcy had observed them together, he concluded that Jane didn’t feel the same. Jane was kind to everyone, and Charles misinterpreted that kindness for affection. Darcy chastised himself, for it was no better for him. Time after time his thoughts returned to Elizabeth. She was so outspoken and radiated a kind of strength he usually found appalling in a woman, and yet…Well, the regatta would distract them both, at least temporarily.

As members of the Beefeaters Club rowing team, they spent many an early summer morning training on the Thames. At the beginning, Darcy felt it would be no great feat to master rowing as he himself was in good physical condition and swam often. The training regimen soon knocked him down a few pegs. He discovered muscles he didn’t even know he possessed, and he ached all over for the first few weeks. His hands blistered. Still, not one to give up easily, he persisted. Now he was in fine shape, and so were the rest of the crew. His hands were as calloused as any dock worker. Darcy had to admit to himself that he quite enjoyed the change.

They arrived early. Darcy brought along his cousin, Col Fitzwilliam, as he was in town and seemed keen to cheer them along. By mid-afternoon their team was assembled. Even though the river was crowded, they were determined to practice at least once or twice before their race the next day. Darcy knew that they had no real hope of winning anything, but he was grateful to Bingley for convincing him to compete. He enjoyed the camaraderie even though he would never seek it out himself.

The boat was long and sleek, and so low to the water that any slight mishap would fill their racing shell with water and send them all into the river. Bingley was the coxswain and steered the boat. He was focused and competent and they would at least make a good showing.

“Good luck, boys,” Col Fitzwilliam called out as he gave the shell a good push into the water. They struck out slowly, and Bingley swivelled and swerved them through the crowd of tourist boats filled with ladies all dressed in white and their male companions, many of whom wore striped jackets and jaunty straw hats. Darcy and his team were dressed as racers, all in white, short-sleeved shirts and short trousers. As Darcy leaned into his oar, his body surged with power and anticipation. He longed to get out on the open river and pull for all he was worth.

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On arrival at Henley, Lizzy was pleasantly surprised. Her parents had booked enough rooms for all of them at the Cherry Tree Inn. She and Jane had a room to themselves, and the Lucases were staying there as well. Opening of the regatta began the next day, so they dressed in their white garb and took a trip down to the river to find their boats. The Thames brimmed with overloaded small craft filled with spectators. Their mother, Lady Lucas, Mary, Lydia, and Kitty went aboard a large tourist vessel equipped with a striped sunshade, lemonade, and comestibles. Lizzy wanted to try her hand at rowing their own boat, so Mr Bennet, Sir William, Charlotte, Jane, and herself struck out in a rowboat.

Charlotte and Jane had no interest in rowing, and her father graciously surrendered his own oar to Lizzy with a wink. She knew his was a sedentary life, and the only reason he was in the boat with Sir William and herself was that it gave him an hour or two’s respite from her mother and her nerves. Boats crowded the river, and spectators filled the shoreline and beyond. They were five or six craft deep themselves, and therefore she attempted to steer their little boat around the others into a small space of empty river.

“Let us head for open water, shall we?” she asked Sir William. She and he were more often than not at cross purposes, and bumped into a few vessels, much to the chagrin of their seafaring neighbours.

“Heave, Miss Elizabeth,” Sir William shouted, and together they struck their oars in the water and pushed forward into the centre of the river with a mighty splash—just as Lizzy noticed a shallow racing shell filled with men hurtling towards them.

“Pull back,” Lizzy shouted, but Sir William, instead of reversing the direction of his oar, pulled in the same direction, propelling them straight into the path of the oncoming racer.

“Hard to port,” a familiar voice shouted, but it was too late.

A crash of oars came first, then the boats collided. In an instant, the slender racing shell capsized. Lizzy’s boat rocked and splashed them with water, but at least they remained upright. The racers, however, were thrown willy-nilly into the water.

“Where’s Bingley? He can’t swim.” Mr Darcy… Elizabeth was sure of his voice now.

A few men clung to the overturned racer, while most treaded water, trying to stay afloat in the current. Those not struggling for their own survival craned their necks back and forth, searching the river. One of them shouted, “Can’t see him.” Lizzy shot a glance at Jane. Her face was ashen.

“What can we do to help?” Lizzy shouted.

“You’ve done quite enough already,” one of the team clinging to the bottom of the racer threw back.

Darcy swam around the racer, looking frantically for Bingley. “Do you see him?” he shouted, then looked up at their rowboat. He started for a moment when he saw Lizzy.

“We don’t.” She scanned the river. “What do we do?”

Darcy didn’t answer. None of the other men were attempting a rescue, and his frustration was clear.

“Can’t one of you help him?” she shouted at them.

“We can’t swim,” one shouted from close by.

She could swim.

All her sisters could.

“Right.” Lizzy pulled her hat off and handed it to Jane. “Hold this.” She did, then Lizzy sat down in front of her. “Undo me.”

“What?”

“Undo my dress, I’m going to help him.”

Lizzy didn’t dare look at her father or Sir William.

“Elizabeth Bennet, I forbid it.” Her father gripped her arm.

She shook it off. “Jane, undo these clasps or my dress will drag me down.”

Jane did as she was told, and Lizzy, free of her dress and corset, in her petticoat and drawers, dove into the river. The shock of the cold water took her breath away for a moment, but she spluttered to the surface to come face-to-face with Mr Darcy.

“I can’t see anything. The river’s too muddy. It’s impossible.” His expression contorted with panic. “You go towards the bow; I’ll take the stern.”

Before Lizzy could reply, he was gone. A cold fear gripped her. The current could easily have pulled Mr Bingley under and swept him down river. Swallowing down her dread, she forced herself to think clearly. There was one other possibility. If he wasn’t there, there was little hope for him. Taking a deep breath, she dove under the capsized shell.

The water was nearly opaque, but she could make out the shape of the racing shell above her and flapping white shapes hanging from the underside. After surfacing underneath the shell, she discovered a thin pocket of air trapped under the boat.

Clinging to one of the seats near the bow, there was Mr Bingley. He grasped tightly to the inverted wooden seat and kept trying to bend his head upward to keep it out of the water. With every movement of the boat from the men clinging to it on the surface, the water splashed over his nose and mouth. Coughing and spluttering, he let out a meagre cry for help. Lizzy took a hold of one of the seats behind him to pull herself up as the boat bobbed. Her efforts splashed the muddy water over Bingley’s face. He let out a cry.

“It’s all right. We found you.”

Bingley did not turn his head to look at her. “Thank God, thank God.” And then, “Is that you, Miss Bennet?”

“Yes. I’m going to leave you for a moment—”

“No.” He croaked out in panic.

“It’s all right. I am going to get Mr Darcy, and he’ll come and get you. Hang on just a little bit longer.”

Bingley kept his neck bent painfully back so that he could keep both his mouth and nose out of the water. His breath came in short, unnerving spurts like a child’s did when she’d been crying. “Don’t leave me. I’ll drown.”

“You won’t. We’ll get you out.”

He might have said something further, but Lizzy didn’t wait. She swam out from under the racing shell, towards the other side of the boat, thinking that Darcy would surface there. A moment after she emerged, so did Darcy.

“The current must have carried him down. I—”

“No, he’s here. Under the boat. He found a pocket of trapped air and is hanging on… near the bow.”

Darcy didn’t stop to argue with her. He dove straight down towards the bow.

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Oh my! Poor Mr. Bingley! Good thing Elizabeth could care less about propriety and took some action! I’m so eager to see what happens next. 🚣🏼‍♀️

I love it when authors translate the the themes and characters to other time periods and settings! Thank you so much for sharing, Maggie!

I wish you all the best with your release of Mr. Darcy and the Suffragette! 🙌🏼

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GIVEAWAY TIME!

Today Maggie generously brings with her  3️⃣ ebook copies and 1️⃣ paperback copy of Mr. Darcy and the Suffragette  to give away to some lucky readers who comment on today’s post!

To enter this giveaway leave a question, comment, or some love for Maggie below.

  • This giveaway is open worldwide (ebooks) and to US residents (paperback). Thank you, Maggie! 
  • This giveaway ends March 15h.

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✨ BOOK SALE ✨

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48 comments

  1. Oh thank you for this excrept, I add already this book added to my list to read, but now it is definitely a book I WANT TO read.

  2. Phew! Thank goodness for Elizabeth! It’s a pity Sir William didn’t listen to her in the first place but at least she helped to rescue Bingley! I do hope he and Darcy are suitably grateful?

  3. I have not read many variations in different time settings but I thoroughly enjoyed the excerpt. Adding this to my list to read!

  4. I like that the author went into a time period between the Regency and now that wasn’t particularly war focused, but I definitely think there’s scope for more on the Suffragette front by going into women’s rights in WW1, if she feels like doing a sequel. The clash of class between gentry and working girls with the background on Selfridges made me feel like I was there. Already got the book but congrats on the release.

    1. Thanks. I was trying to avoid going into WWI with this book. The Titanic sinking was traumatic enough. Maybe I will do a sequel. There’s an idea!

  5. Wow, that was intense. Glad Elizabeth could swim, and was able to pinpoint where Bingley was under the row boat. I look forward to reading the published story.

    1. The book is out and available on Amazon, B&N, and all other eBook platforms. Also, there’s a giveaway!

  6. That was intense – I am looking forward to reading an author that is new to me. Thank you for the excerpt and giveaway. Best wishes and congrats on the new release!

  7. Oh, this sounds interesting – I love how this variation sets the story in the 20th century. I enjoyed reading the excerpt and cannot wait to find out what happens next. Congratulations to the author on the new release!

  8. Okay I need to know what happened to them! Will they all survive? Will Lizzy get in trouble!?

  9. What a fun time period to explore! I think Elizabeth would have been right at home as a sufferegette! I look foward to reading the west of the story!

  10. I haven’t read a variation in this time period yet, and I’m looking forward to it! I bet they’ll figure out that Jane cares now!

  11. Great writing. The scene certainly held my interest. I could see it all happening and I wonder what Darcy will think when he sees Elizabeth emerging from the water in wet clothes! And for that matter what will she think when she sees Darcy emerging from the water in wet clothes!

    1. You can find out! The book is available on Amazon, B&N and on Smashwords for a bargain price until March 11.

  12. What an exciting excerpt. I can’t wait to read this one. Congratulations on your release and ladies for featuring here.

  13. I don’t recall ever reading an early 20th century variation. Lizzy as a suffragette is an intriguing concept that I’m eager to get into.

  14. Thank you all for you comments. Please try the giveaway and check out Smashwords Read an eBook week. Mr. Darcy and the Suffragette is a bargain price until March 11! Also available on Amazon, B&N and all major platforms. If you do read the book, please leave me a review on Goodreads, Amazon, Bookbub or wherever. It is sooo helpful to authors. Lastly, I have two other books, Elizabeth in the New World and the sequel, The Darcys of New Orleans. Thanks again for commenting.

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