Dec 022016


Hello dear readers!  I’m so excited to welcome back author Joana Starnes to Austenesque Reviews today!  Joana has had such an amazing year and it wasn’t too long ago she was here celebrating her release of Miss Darcy’s Companion!  And now she has a fabulous new release out – Mr. Bennet’s Dutiful Daughter!  Joana pops in today to share one her beautifully romantic scenes between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth – you know the type, be prepared to swoon! – we hope you enjoy!  (Scene rated PG-13)

Thank you, Meredith, for ever so kindly welcoming me as your guest today to conclude the joana-starnesblog tour for my latest book at Austenesque Reviews. It’s wonderful to be here again!

Mr Bennet’s Dutiful Daughter is a journey of self-discovery – the story of Elizabeth Darcy’s journey from duty into love. The synopsis rather hints at that:

When Colonel Fitzwilliam’s disclosures are interrupted by the bearer of distressing news from Longbourn, Miss Elizabeth Bennet is compelled to accept an offer she would have otherwise dismissed out of hand. An offer of marriage from the all-too-proud Mr Darcy. Yet how is she to live with a husband she hardly knows and does not love? Will she continue to feel trapped in a marriage of convenience while events conspire to divide them? Or would love grow as, day by day and hour after hour, she learns to understand the man she married, before she loses his trust and his heart?

Of course, all JAFF lovers will have already guessed the answer: love would grow, day by day and hour after hour. How could it be otherwise? We could not bear to envisage any other fate for our favourite couple. So no one will be surprised to hear that in this variation they are once again winding their way towards the happily ever after through the maze of difficulties inevitable in an early marriage scenario; through half-truths and misunderstandings ending in sweet harmony and tender reconciliation.

What better way to end the blog tour than with an excerpt showing just that?

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Mr Bennet’s Dutiful Daughter

Excerpt from Chapter 17

mr-bennets-dutiful-daughter“Yes, Sarah, that will do,” Elizabeth impatiently hastened her maid along and waved aside the question about her choice of hairstyle for the day. “No matter. I will see to it myself. Pray go and let Mr Darcy know I will be down directly.”

The red rose discovered on her nightstand had sent her pattering barefoot to the interconnecting door, with only a modicum of sense gaining the upper hand at the last moment and compelling her to knock.

She should have had more sense and donned a dressing gown, she could not help thinking when the knock was answered not by Darcy but his valet, who trained his eyes on the doorframe and barely moved a muscle other than those designed to govern his lips as he tonelessly delivered, “The master has repaired below-stairs, Ma’am.”

“Oh. Pray be so kind and ask him to wait,” Elizabeth breathlessly instructed as she dashed out of sight to spare their blushes and also to summon Sarah.

The dear girl was quick to do her duty and just as quick to leave the bedchamber to convey the second message to Mr Darcy, as requested, while Elizabeth’s fingers carelessly worked her unruly mane into a plait, pinned it up into a chignon and hid away the unprepossessing result of her efforts under the ubiquitous cap before hastening below-stairs. She found her husband in the breakfast parlour, waiting by the window, in a posture she had grown to recognise so well and find so endearing – that is, when he was not looking like thunder.

That morning he was very far from it. A warm smile lit his eyes at her entrance and Elizabeth returned it in full.

“Good morning,” she greeted him brightly. “I am so glad you have not left yet.”

“I got your word. But I also wished to see you before leaving.”

He came to take her hands.

“Have you slept well?”

She gave a conscious little laugh.

“Too well, it seems. Lost to the world. You should have woken me.”

“I returned very late.”

“It would not have mattered. But thank you for the exquisite rose.”

He merely nodded in response, and Elizabeth fell silent too, uncommonly lost for words. At last she found some, and she whispered, “I hope your day goes well,” as her hand came up to brush an imaginary spec of dust from his lapel.

There could have been no spec of dust, of course. Weston would have never countenanced sending his master out into the world looking anything less than impeccable. So her hand brushed at nothing but smooth cloth, then remained still, and her eyes flashed up at his, to find such longing there that her heart lurched, instantly full to the brim. Instantly overflowing with a rush of feeling that urged her forward to stand on tiptoe and press her lips to his.

The response was immediate and fierce. She was clasped to his chest, the crushing embrace vying with wild kisses to render her utterly breathless, clinging to his shoulders as to the only anchor in a dizzying world. And hungry kisses still devoured her lips, roamed over her face and returned to her lips again to claim them more forcefully than ever, as her fingers swiftly obeyed the natural compulsion of making their way into his hair to caress, and hold, and keep him to her, little risk as there was of him drawing away. Just as eager, his hands swept over her back, stroking, clasping, then stilled and the hold tightened, as though he would never let her go.

“Good Lord, Elizabeth, I missed you,” he groaned against her lips, crushing them under his again with renewed hunger. Insatiable.

She fervently responded and only drew away to whisper, “I was always here.”

“You were not. You were resentful, distant… How could I come to you while we were hurling such hurtful– ?” His words came in a rush, disjointed and barely comprehensible between burning kisses, but he continued to intersperse them nonetheless – not that Elizabeth could have wished him to do otherwise. “Why do you imagine… that I took myself away… for hours on end… and two nights in a row?”

She drew back then.

“Why?” she asked, searching his eyes.

“Because I could not bear to be near you and not come to you, and I could not come to you when you were so clearly against me. Because in the midst of the harshest reproaches flying between us I could not tell if what I wanted most was to throttle you or kiss you.”

Her warm laughter rang between them.

“Oh, I would say kiss me. Definitely kiss me, if those were the only options.”

“Not the only options. Not by a fair margin,” he playfully growled back, and did kiss her again, not needing further prompting.

Their breaths came in ragged gasps when they stopped for air, still clinging to each other.

“Should you not go? You will be late,” she offered eventually, when she discovered she could speak.

“Go? I am not going anywhere!”

“Foolish man,” she tenderly admonished. “You must. Your uncle is expecting you.”

“What I must do,” he said showering her face and head with a much tamer smattering of little kisses, “is have a word with that girl of yours, Sarah, and bribe her into throwing all these godawful caps away. Whoever has devised them? The devil’s own invention, I call it. I love your hair. Why must you cover it?”

“You will not love it quite so much this morning. It looks a fright. I took no pains with it, so that I did not tarry for too long and miss you, but…” With a wide smile and a sweeping gesture worthy of Master Shakespeare and his Katharina, she removed it and dropped it to the floor. “Off with this bauble that becomes me not. I am all too happy to throw it underfoot.”

“And good riddance,” he smiled into her hair. His kisses drifted to her brow and then her cheek, before he reached to raise her chin and her eyes to his. “You must know this is where it ends, the point of comparison,” he said warmly, yet very gently. “You are no shrew, my love and, my abhorrence of caps aside, I would never seek to tame you. Nor, heaven forefend, have you see me as your lord and master demanding wifely duty and unquestioning obedience.”

She stroked his face, relishing the words, praying he was in earnest. Only time would tell. But she would not ask, then and there, how his avowal reflected on their major disagreement. She would not have him think she had come to kiss him breathless just to gain her uncle and aunt admittance into the house in Berkeley Square. Instead, she willingly abandoned herself to further kisses, forgetting he should have left the house already. Apparently so did he, as his hands roamed all the way from her back into her tresses.

“As for this hairstyle, do not disparage it. It seems a vast deal easier to unravel than any, if you ask me,” he raggedly whispered, burying his fingers into it with such thoroughness of purpose that the pins began to fall to the floor, first one, then another, and another.

“For shame, Fitzwilliam! In the breakfast parlour?” she chided, but there was no sting to it, for she did not draw back from his embrace, nor from his ministrations.

“Mmm-hm…” he murmured, his lips on hers again and his hands straying into caresses the breakfast parlour was indeed ill-suited for.

She still did not withdraw, but covered his hand with hers and kept it on her breast even as she sensibly offered, “You cannot cancel your engagement with your uncle without notice. You should go and see him.”

“Not remotely possible, I fear,” he replied between kisses. “Lord Langthorne will have to be satisfied with a full letter of apology.”

“An obvious solution springs to mind, you know,” she teased, then elaborated. “That he might be better satisfied with a note changing the hour? Although goodness knows how you might pacify Weston for having his first efforts go to waste.”

Darcy shrugged, supremely indifferent to his valet’s plight.

“Weston will have to bear the disappointment.”

And so he had. As it happened, he also had to bear the discomfort of witnessing his master returning above-stairs carrying Mrs Darcy in his arms. Well-accustomed to the ways of the world, albeit not to such displays in this household, Mr Weston knew when to make himself scarce. Yet he was not even allowed that comfort, but was asked to cool his heels in the hallway, until Mr Darcy re-emerged with a curt, “Pray have this sent to Langthorne House at once.”

And then the door was slammed shut and Mr Weston was left to his own devices, to stare at the hastily sealed note addressed in such poor penmanship that it bore no resemblance to Mr Darcy’s hand at all, but looked strikingly like one of Mr Bingley’s scribbles. Mr Weston’s brow twitched and, as he knew the master from his boyhood and moreover as the hallway was deserted, he allowed himself a wide grin and an understanding shrug.

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*Sigh* Oh I love it!  Poor Mr. Weston! LOL!  And yay for Darcy and Elizabeth!  I love when they are like this.  Thanks for sharing such a sweet and lovely excerpt with us, Joana!  I’m very intrigued to learn what took place before this happy scene!

Thanks again for the wonderful welcome, Meredith! You’re ever so kind and it’s such a pleasure to be your guest, every time!

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In conjunction with her very lovely post, Joana Starnes generously brings with her TWO kindle EBOOKs of Mr. Bennet’s Dutiful Daughter, for me to give away to TWO lucky readers!!!!

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To enter this giveaway, leave a comment, question, or some love for Joana!

  • This giveaway is open worldwide.  Thank you, Joana!
  • This giveaway ends December 9th!


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  57 Responses to “Excerpt + Giveaway Author Joana Starnes!!!”


    Wow sounds absolutely fabulous. Must have. I have put it on my Christmas present list – fingers crossed!!


    Oh, I just can’t wait for this one! Thanks for posting Joana’s excerpt – am a big fan of her work and love her craftsmanship of weaving words together – this story looks like one that can take you “miles away”!!!


    sounds wonderful……on my tbr pile (which is groaning from its weight with all these fun JAFFs!)


      So much great new JAFF, Theresa! I saw Meredith’s latest lists and can’t wait to catch up on my reading. Thanks for stopping by to read this excerpt, I’m so glad you liked it! Good luck in the giveaway 🙂


    Don’t enter me in the giveaway since I gleefully purchased this already, but I just wanted to share my love for this book and thank Joanna for writing it! One of my favorites of 2016 and probably in my top 10 all-time variations.


    Oh yes, swoon worthy and knee-buckling! Don’t enter me in the giveaway as I was given this book as a gift. Now to find a long stretch of time to read it without interruption!


      Thanks for stopping by to leave this lovely comment, Carole! Hope you’ll like the book when you get the chance to read it. People say you might need to stock up on chocolate and tissues 😉 Many thanks and all the best!


    Oh my Joana. I’m going to have to read this again! I just love this passionate Darcy – lucky Elizabeth! It’s a shame the tour has come to an end. I’m afraid it means you will just have to write another book (and though I do love all your books I can’t think how you will top this one but I thought that last time as well so ……..)
    Please don’t enter me in the giveaway Meredith as I already have this wonderful book


      Lucky, lucky gal in all the variations, isn’t she, Glynis? She ends up with Mr Darcy every time 🙂

      Thanks ever so much for your wonderful words about MBDD, for the great review and your support throughout the blog tour, you’re so kind!! THANK YOU!!

      LOL I’ve no idea how I can top this one either 😀 I’m thinking about a less angsty one for a change but we all know how this is going to end, no matter how it starts and despite all the good intentions.

      Have a lovely weekend and please say hi to Pemberley and Mr Darcy for me if you visit 🙂


      I agree, Glynis! Elizabeth is so very lucky! Isn’t a passionate Darcy so swoony?!?


    A question for Joana – has she ever thought about writing a story where Darcy and Elizabeth are just the minor characters if in the story at all. I like the idea of a story about the Colonel and Mary Bennet.


      I don’t think I can let go of them and focus on others, Vesper. I find their beautiful love story absolutely addictive. I was thinking of writing a sequel to ‘The Unthinkable Triangle’ though, that would look into the Colonel’s love life, but D & E would be lead characters too.

      Thanks for following the blog tour, best of luck in the giveaway and I hope you’ll like the book.


    Such a swoon-worthy excerpt. It has been a great ride from the unveiling of the stunning cover, through some extra details and an exclusive vignette. I’m sorry to see the end of your tour, Joana. ;(
    Looking forward to the next tour (hint, hint).


      I’m ever so glad you liked the excerpt, Kate! Thanks ever so much for following the blog tour from the very start, it was wonderful chatting to you! Best of luck and I can’t wait to hear what you thought of the whole story, when you get to read it, angst an’ all. Just make sure you stock up on chocolate 😉


      Thank you, Kate, for the generous compliment. Joana is such a hard-working author. She made this tour a lot of fun for readers!


    I have the book and love it, so don’t enter me in the drawing. I just wish to say this book is so entertaining you will not be able to put it down. Once again Joana has shown why she is one of my favorite authors! She never disappoints.


      Thanks ever so much for the wonderful support, Brenda!! You’re always so kind 🙂 I’m so happy you liked MBDD, that’s such high praise coming from you! All the best and lots of inspiration, we can’t have enough of your wonderfully romantic books.


    What a great excerpt. So romantic with Mr. Darcy carrying her in his arms. Poor Mr. Weston:)


      So glad you liked it, DarcyBennet! Thank you!
      Poor Mr Weston indeed, such goings-on in the Darcy household 😉
      I hope you’ll like the full story. Best of luck in the giveaway!




    I lllove it! can’t wait to read it all…


    Wonderful scene from a wonderful book. Even though I’ve already read it, it’s been so much fun following the tour, Joana.

    Good luck to all who’ve entered the giveaways. The winners are in for such a treat, tissues and chocolate notwithstanding. For those who aren’t lucky, you need to read this book, so don’t hesitate to get your own copy!


      Thanks ever so much for the fabulous review and all your support, Anji!! It was such fun to chat to you, all the way from the guessing games. Thanks for following the blog tour from the very beginning to the last and for all your wonderful comments about MBDD, I’m so happy you liked it!


    Can’t wait to read this!


    Thank you so much, Meredith, for your support and for hosting Joana’s yummy excerpt for your readers! What a delectable scene, in the breakfast roo, with Mr Darcy, oh my!!!!

    We so appreciate everything you do for JAFF authors and readers. Have a great weekend.


      Thank you both, Meredith and Claudine, for your kind words and your fabulous support!!

      I’m ever so glad you liked the excerpt, Meredith! Many thanks for hosting the last post on the blog tour, you’ve always been so wonderfully kind and welcoming and I greatly appreciate the chance to wrap it up with an excerpt (preferably smoochy, as per 😉 ) on your lovely site.

      It was a fantastic launch and blog tour, Claudine, and I can’t thank you enough for this truly magical experience!

      Huge thanks to you both, you’re wonderful!!! <3


      Thank you for your kind words, Claudine! I’m in love with this excerpt, Joana! Thank you so much for choosing it for my blog! 😀 I love me some smoochy scenes! LOL! It was wonderful to take part in the tour, ladies! Thanks again!


    Sound Ed great!


    What a marvelous excerpt, Joana! I absolutely loved it!! Such a passionate Darcy, I can’t wait to read it. Thanks for the giveaway! 🙂


      An absolute pleasure, Daniela! I’m so happy you loved the excerpt! Thanks for following the blog tour from the very beginning and fingers crossed for a lucky strike in at least one of the giveaways 🙂 Hope you’ll read the rest of the story soon and that you’ll like it.


    Completely smitten with your writing, Joana. This one has been on the top of my wish list for weeks. When I saw the new one come out, I went to your Amazon author page and realized I already had two of yours I hadn’t read yet….HOW did I let THAT slip by me?!! So, when Thanksgiving prep was under control I started reading those and then reread The Falmouth Connection, all within about a week’s time period.

    Well, boxes of tissues and a couple headaches from crying later I now cannot wait to read Mr. Bennet’s Dutiful Daughter. (I think chocolate may just have shoved me over the edge.) And I couldn’t make myself reread The Unthinkable Triangle, have to build up my strength for that first. 🙂

    The very very best of luck on the success of this book, and on any future ventures. If you write the Phone Book next time I’ll read it.


      Huge thanks for this amazing message, Michelle, you’re ever so kind!!!!! And what do I do? I give you a couple of headaches! Oh, that’s not right – so sorry about that!!! I do hope MBDD won’t tip you over the edge, with or without chocolate 🙂 Just think of the HEA (we’ve GOT to have one for D&E! Always!!!) and of the fact that at least our dear Mr D is happy for the vast majority of the book (ignorance is bliss and all that 😉 ) until he gets shoved over the edge too, but not for long. 50 pages max, scout’s honour!!!
      Your lovely comment got me all the way from ‘Awwww!’ to ‘Oh, no!!’ and then to giggles. LOL I promise not to write the Phone Book, but it’s so wonderfully kind of you to say so! Have a lovely weekend, a great festive season and all the best!


    What a compelling excerpt! I am definitely putting this one on my to read list. I loved The unthinkable triangle and Mr. Bennet’s dutiful daughter seems to be just as wonderful a story! Never stop writing please


      Thanks for the ever so kind words, Debbie, I’m so happy you liked this excerpt and The Unthinkable Triangle! There’s nowhere near as much angst for Mr Darcy in ‘Mr B’s Dutiful Daughter’ (it was Elizabeth’s turn to be at the receiving end of it 😉 ) but I hope you’ll like it too. Best of luck in the giveaway and thanks for stopping by to read the post and leave this lovely comment!


    My TBR lust continues to grow already had Miss Darcys Companion on it and now have another title I can’t wait to read. LOVED the excerpt and look forward to the rest of the story.
    Thanks for the chance to win.


    Aaahh! Another wonderful excerpt!


    Wonderful, wonderful excerpt! Alright. I won’t be able to go on with my life if I don’t read this book! 😀


    I already read the book, so no need to include me in the giveaway. The story was awesome. Thanks Meredith for featuring Joana here. Jen Red


    Joana I really enjoyed “Miss Darcy’s Companion” and I’m really looking forward to this new one after reading the excerpt. Keep the great books coming!


      Many thanks for this, Danielle 🙂 I’m so glad you liked ‘Miss D’s Companion’ and this excerpt too. I hope you’ll like the whole story. Best of luck in the giveaway and thanks for stopping by to read the post!


    I loved this one so much I now own both a kindle copy and a paperback. Great story…I do love the angst!

    I don’t need the book but wanted to say how much I loved it.


    I’ve loved Joanna’s other books and look forward to this one too!


    ‘A wide grin and an understanding shrug…’ Aw!! Totally understandable!
    Such a touching excerpt….will definitely have to re-read this story again,in the not too distant future! Thanks Joana!


    Wonderful, Joana. Always so. Thanks for hosting, Meredith!

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