Apr 202012

Author Guest Post

I  am most pleased to welcome Karen M. Cox to Austenesque Reviews as she celebrates her new release, Find Wonder in All Things!  I had the pleasure of reading and reviewing Karen’s first novel, 1932, on my blog in November 2010 and I am very excited to read her modern-day retelling of Persuasion – which sounds amazing, by the way!  In her guest post today, she discusses the themes1932 of Persuasion and how she was able to turn our beloved Anne Elliot into a modern-day heroine.  Thank you, Karen, for including Austenesque Reviews on your blog tour!  We wish you the best of luck in your new release!

Persuading a Beloved 18thCentury Heroine to Enter a Modern Era

Thanks for the invitation to guest blog here at Austenesque Reviews, Meredith! I always enjoy coming here and combing through the reviews and interviews.

I love reading historical novels from a variety of time periods — Regency, Victorian, Medieval, the American West. Those settings provide an escape to different places and exciting times, and they always broaden my perspective a bit — and induce me to read more about that time period. Sometimes, though, I relish the idea of bringing forward ‘old-fashioned’ ideas into modern stories.

That was my objective when I wrote my second novel, which was recently released by Meryton Press in paperback, Kindle and Nook formats. Find Wonder in All Thingsis a Persuasion-inspired novel, set in the late 20thcentury. It is the story of Laurel Elliot, a young woman who has an intense love affair the summer after she graduates from high school. The young man she falls for is a college student who takes a seasonal job working at her father’s marina. After a bitter break-up and a long separation, they meet again, but it seems that everything has changed for them. Find Wonder in All Things then explores the conventional Persuasion story arc within a modern-day context.

Find Wonder in All ThingsNow, I realize there are probably ten Pride & Prejudice-based books for every one that takes on Persuasion. This is, in part, because Fitzwilliam Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet are some of the most fascinating characters in literature. I’ve written a P&P variation myself, my first novel, 1932. But Persuasion is a special story too — a deep, emotional ride through the psyche of a woman named Anne Eliot, whom no one but the author, and subsequently the reader, really knows. The character of Anne tugs at my heartstrings in a way that not even my beloved Lizzy Bennet manages to do.

To me, Persuasion is a story of three themes: forgiveness, second chances, and the supreme importance of timing. Anne must forgive Frederick for his anger toward her after she breaks their engagement, and also for his insensitivity to her when they are reacquainted some years later. Frederick must forgive Anne for hurting his pride and rejecting him when they were young and in love.

The reappearance of Captain Wentworth in Anne’s circle of friends is an opportunity to reconnect with her only love, but second chances in relationships have to be taken by both parties, and he doesn’t seem so inclined when they first meet again. Taking a second chance means letting go of old hurts, and for much of the book, it seems that Captain Fred is unable to move past…well, the past.

Finally, the issue of timing reigns supreme as an important factor that directs the characters’ lives. Some of the most profound lines in Persuasion are uttered by Anne herself, regarding her decision to break her engagement to the young, brash Lieutenant Wentworth:

I am not saying that she (Lady Russell) did not err in her service. It was, perhaps, one of those cases in which advice is good or bad only as the event decides; and for myself, I certainly never should, in any circumstance of tolerable similarity, give such advice. But I mean that I was right in submitting to her, and that if I had done otherwise, I should have suffered more in continuing the engagement than I did even in giving it up, because I should have suffered in my conscience. I have now, as far as such a sentiment is allowable in human nature, nothing to reproach myself with; and if I mistake not, a strong sense of duty is no bad part of a woman’s portion.”
-Persuasion, Chapter 23

The reality — and Jane Austen knew this — is that young Lieutenant Wentworth and his well-born bride could have made out swimmingly (forgive the naval pun), or the marriage could have been a disaster, filled with disappointment, poverty and suffering. Anne was forced to make a decision without knowing all the facts or realities in her future (as it is with some of our most important decisions). The timing of an incident can make a choice easy or difficult, good or bad — and experience and wisdom are often the best tools to see how an event’s timing might influence our lives.

What an enduring set of themes for a story! And how relevant to our modern times! What an incredible contemporary tale is buried within this almost 200-year-old text!


Anne Eliot is an old-fashioned girl. If you put her Regency self in our modern society, she can appear – as one of my readers commented – ‘pathetic’ instead of ‘sympathetic.’ In the original book, she is initially described as a ‘woman past her bloom’ – at 27 years of age, if you can imagine! Almost no one these days thinks of a 27-year-old woman as an old maid. The dictates of Regency society subjugate the unmarried Anne to the whims and poor judgment of her father and older sister, a pair of irresponsible, self-absorbed and vain people. The older Eliots stubbornly cling to a class system that is dying in their England, yet the family holds sway over Anne’s social and financial well-being. She tries to rein in her father and elder sister’s expenditures, but she has no real power over them to enforce the necessary economy. To make matters worse, their blasé disregard for her feelings borders on cruelty. Anne is a Cinderella without the step-sisters, and a heroine saddled with a well-meaning but flawed fairy godmother, in the form of her mother’s friend, Lady Russell. Society’s rules prevent Anne from expressing her feelings about Wentworth. She isn’t supposed to be assertive with the opposite sex, so she can’t tell him how she regrets and misses him. In many ways, at the beginning of the novel, Anne Eliot looks to our modern eyes like what some readers might call ‘a doormat.’

Now, consider the challenge of bringing said ‘doormat’ to the late 20thcentury. How do you make a believable modern-day Anne Eliot, long after the dissolution of class distinctions based on birth? Or after women’s suffrage and the women’s movement that took place in the US during the 60s and 70s? Or after the Sexual Revolution? What would induce a modern woman to not follow her heart, when the pundits of modern society are always screaming ‘follow your heart and everything will turn out fine’?

Then there is the issue of Regency Anne’s isolation at her family’s home in Kellynch – to understate the point, the girl does not get out much! If a modern woman were that isolated, it would have to be at least in part by choice, would it not? Or would it perhaps be because of financial necessity? A choice of lifestyle? A self-imposed simplification of her life?

And what about the disapproval from Anne’s family and friends? Modern parents would not dismiss a young man interested in their daughter based on lack of noble birth. So what would an impractical modern Sir Walter Eliot value that he doesn’t see in a modern Wentworth? Lady Russell’s advice to break the engagement in Persuasion is tainted by her belief in a class system to which we no longer subscribe (at least publicly). If I had any chance of bringing Persuasion to modern times, in any kind of realistic way, I had to explain my Lady Russell’s advice in a manner that shows her opinion to be flawed, but still believable.

In general, I tried to work around these issues by removing them from the macrocosm of society’s structure, and bringing them in to the microcosm of Laurel’s life as an individual person. In place of Regency class differences, I substituted differences in views on education, money, and what should be the driving force in a person’s life. In place of physical isolation, I made an isolated existence for Laurel based on her personality, family dynamics and her choice of profession. I made it easier for Laurel to idolize her Wentworth by making him as incredibly dashing, romantic and sexy as I could, then keeping her in virtual isolation (by her circumstances and her choices) so no other man could touch her heart for a long time. I had to show a fault in the advice of my Lady Russell character, a flaw that isn’t readily apparent to a young Laurel Elliot, but was precipitated by an outdated view of the world and of male-female relationships.

It wasn’t easy. I wanted to thump them both on the head —many times. But the characters’ foibles endeared them to me. And to watch them change — as an author, to make them — forgive each other and the others around them, see their opportunities and take advantage of them, all intermeshed in the chaotic swirl of unpredictable timing and serendipitous chance, was an exciting roller-coaster of a writing journey.


GIVEAWAY!!!  Thanks to the lovely people at Meryton Press I have ONE BRAND NEW paperback copy of Find Wonder in All Things to give away!!!

All you have to do is leave a comment on this guest post. (To save your inbox from unwanted spam, please don’t leave your email address.) Just check back to see if you win! Fortunately for our international friends, this giveaway is open worldwide! Thank you, Michele!!

This contest ends April 30th!!!  Best of luck and thank you for entering!

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  18 Responses to “Guest Post + Giveaway with Karen M. Cox”


    Oooh. I’m first. Karen, I’ve always loved your writing–beautifully restraint and yet an emotional read.

    Exellent blog here. I agree, I think there’s something isolating about Anne Elliot, and I’m very curious to see how you convey this.

    Looking forward to what I know will be a wonderful time with your second book. 1932 was one of my favorite moderns.


    I am very much looking forward to reading this and seeing how you decided to modernize Anne & Wentworth’s story. 1932 is one of my favorite Austenesque stories. One of the things I liked best was the time period seemed almost ambiguous – not modern and not Regency. Since Anne is an old-fashioned girl in a rural place, I’m thinking this may have a similar feel to it.

    Thanks for the giveaway!


    I really want to read this! Like those above, I enjoyed 1932! Thanks for the chance to win a copy!


    A modern day Persuasion! Sounds like a good one too, can’t wait to read it.


    btw-cute cover!


    Karen, congrats for this wonderful book and for the lovely post !


    Persuasion is my favorite Austen novel. I haven’t read 1932 so I have no idea about Karen’s writing style. This premise and her logic sound interesting. Congratulations on a second novel.


    I hope I win! It sounds really interesting!


    This unique novel sounds captivating and special. Thanks. elliotbencan(at)hotmail(dot)com


    What a wonderful story which interests me greatly. Love to read this book. saubleb(at)gmail(dot)com


    I love reading this post. Persuasion is my favourite novel besides P&P so any contemporary take on the novel is my cup of tea. Please add me to this giveaway.


    Great post – I’m looking forward to reading how you make the transition to modern. Please enter me in the giveaway!


    Yay!!!! I love Persuasion as my favorite Austen novel so I really enjoyed reading your post breaking down the story and how to make it work for modern times.

    I look forward to reading your book and I appreciate the opportunity to win it.


    Thanks Meredith and all who have commented so far. It’s good to see there are so many Persuasion fans out there!


    Wow! Thanks so much for the giveaway! I’ve always wanted to give Persuasion retellings a try!! Thanks Meredith!


    Persuasion is my favorite! There aren’t enough reel kings and adaptations.


    I had the pleasure of meeting Karen at the Southern Kentucky Book Festival over the weekend. She is absolutely delightful.
    I, too, love Persuasion retellings. Thank you for the giveaway, Meredith.


    I love Persuasion and look forward to reading a modern version.

    Jennifer W


    I love Persuasion and look forward to reading a modern version.

    Jennifer W

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